I wrote a poem a few months back ago in November a week before thanksgiving. The poem was a rhyming poem but it was very powerful to me about life. The poem is below, please give me feedback.

I’m now walking dead.

It’s unbelievable I can’t even began to lift my head.

I dream at night so much while lying in bed.

 

It’s beginning to become sad.

It’s as if I walk around the world and no one looks glad.

 

Turning on the TV, and flipping the newspaper every day,

Observing how people die in so many negative ways.

 

I just sit back and wonder,

When would we change?

When would we get along?

Why can’t our young generation live so long?

 

The reason……..

 

Because the kids of today,

Don’t know the difference between right and wrong.

 

It’s the lyrics that they receive from all the inappropriate songs.

The killing never stops.

 

This is what the youth don’t see,

It makes life obfuscated to show who they really want to be.